Animatic and Storyboard

Here is our rough animatic. I am quite disappointed with the way its tells our story. Mike Hirsch reviewed it and said it lack the tension he was expecting and he suggested we bring the farmer into the story and try rearranging certain camera angles which will flow the shots better into each other.With the farmer more prominent in the story we could use him to build up more dramatic effect when our hero is trying to steal the egg.